Aug 4, 2007

星星梦

人生的梦,
人生的插曲,
天气的变化,伴随人生的起落,
冰冰,怦怦

有节拍地起落,
一个旋,一个转,
一个没有尽头的旅程,
一阵风,把梦的美,吹到了蓝色的天空,

吹进了世界的每个角落,
冰冷的,潮湿的,
炎热干燥,
天涯海角,都能嗅到风的味道

吹偏了整个空间,
吹过高山,吹过田野,
吹进了你的梦,
吹进了你的思想。。

沙漠里的夜晚,
冰冷的风,潮湿的夜,
柔如布,细如水,
没人的夜,只盼星星的陪伴,
没关系,晓得梦还在前端,
没有止尽,但是特别的地方,

一个甜蜜的秘密,
星星,
唤醒了恶魔的热忱,
看不到邪恶,
只有充满光芒正义的未来。。

星星成为剑,
月亮成为盾牌,
拔剑,挥刀,
咔喳,
斩去了小草,
跟着连跑带跳的步伐,
再一步走近消失在历史里的梦。。

10 comments:

Teddy said...

err... read it like three times..
but stil duno wat u mean leh..
r u trying to talk about wind or dream?

layyen said...

一个抽象却不失意境的星星梦~~~

Teddy said...

Thanx Layyen
no i understand liao...
everything happen in the dream hor..
cool!!!

layyen said...

ahaha..teddy,那是我的感觉而已~应该能被解读为多种形态吧。。哈哈。。
这类文章能被归类为‘作者死亡论’文章哟。。。哈哈。。。就是作者的理念并没那么的强烈于突出,反而在作品完成后,作者的理念与概念全都死亡(也可说是重生),而由读者自己见解~~~~
哈哈。。。说重点:应该让作者跟你说他所要表达的才对~~

Teddy said...

Oh Layyen, i understand,
u mean when he wrote dis thing, he duno wat he wana write actually..
dats y, he din emphasize anything in detail actually..
so when we read, cant really find his meaning..
rite???!

Bon said...

ha sorry for the late reply

erm teddy u're tryin to challenge me isit huh don understand then search dictionary lar aiyo haha just kidding..
thanks for reading my creation for 3 times,n still din get bored(if i 're you,i would just ignore the whole thing:P),trying to figure out what did i mean sum more,thanks for that ha

首先必须让你了解到,当我再写那篇‘东东’时,我不是很注重在我的用词方面,对我来说只要读的顺就行,不过,重要的是,我写那篇文章是全全出于内心的感受的,是在我对自己的梦想有着深刻的热忱时的那一刹那说写出来的内心话,所以在出于读者的心态也许会摸不出什么所以然出来,不过,也许,我说也许啦,当你觉得你对你的梦想有着很强烈的热忱,很强的冲动时,你不妨再来读一次,可能感觉会不同吧,谢谢:)
*谢谢丽艳:)

Teddy said...

thankx bonbon,
get wat u mean liao..
hehehe

layyen said...

teddy,i doesnt mean tat he dunnoe wat he write yo..haha....
作者死亡论是指'读者'不懂作者的意境
而自我设计解读。哈哈~~~不好意思,把你搞糊涂~~~
paiseih bon..haha..你的星星梦是个不失意境的梦...n_n

Teddy said...

okie dokie
lol...
this is the most controversial post u hav bonbon...
lol!!!!

Bon said...

no la,we share what we thought that's all,
it's always good to have some debates,no matter in real live or in science,i mean,you cant just 'drink in' what is written in the text books right?there must have some kind of erm,struggle in your mind before you make your conclusion whether you choose to believe it or not,or you don't believe it but still ''accept'' it since majority claims that it's true..if u get wat i'm tryin to say..
in short,opinions..y not?:P

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